Haiku Poem… Revised

For my second revision of a previously posted assignment, I decided to revise my assignment A Haiku Poem About A Haiku Poem (the title is pretty self explanatory).

Here is my original poem:

A Haiku Poem
Five seven five seems easy
But Haikus are hard.

Haikus about cats
Haikus about barbecues
Poems about all.

Think five seven five
And write about anything
A Haiku Poem

In order to revise this assignment, I decided to add more to my haiku, and relate to this semester’s theme of “What’s (Y)our Story?”, and the struggle that college students go through.

Here is my new haiku:

A Haiku Poem
Five seven five seems easy
But Haikus are hard.

Haikus about cats
Haikus about barbecues
Poems about all.

Think five seven five
And write about anything
A Haiku Poem

I write for a grade
Haikus tell stories for class
College is my life

Sometimes I like school
Other times it is a drag
Is my work worth it?

A Haiku poem
Seems like it should be simple
Writing my feelings?

A Haiku poem
Seems like it should be simple
I write for a grade

You relate to me
A story of a student 
Haikus my grades

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